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Guest post by "Denizen"
I'm not sure I understand the reasoning behind the guy wandering around behind the girls. Even as a cameo, doesn't this mean you are going to have to explain his presence there? He has to figure into the story somehow, otherwise when someone reads this without the commentary it won't make any sense, like, oh this random guy is wandering around in Crys's dad's secret, magically hidden underground vault with a list.