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Guest post by "Gunsolo"
My favorites are chapters one and four.
I like world building and origin stories, as well as rescues, heists and other fun action stories. I also liked the Terminator-style robots in the Devil arcana.
Oh, and discovery of superpowers, those are always nice too. Smile

I think my least favorite is chapter five.
I thought the pacing was off somehow, and I really didn't connect with the intruders. Not knowing anything about who they were, why they were attacking and what they were after didn't help either.
After all, heroes are only as good/interesting as the villains that they face, and Baron Sir an his lackeys (and that one glimpse of his boss) were not up to par with the other antagonists in my opinion.
I did like my cameo though. Smile

I wouldn't call chapter five bad though, mind you. I just think it's not as good as the other ones.

I reserve judgement of chapter six until it's actually finished and can be seen as a whole.

I agree with JD that the hiatus was not fun.